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Post by oshun on Apr 10, 2009 22:01:52 GMT -6
This is incridbely awesome. The best back story for lUthien I have ever read! It really explains a lot. I love the way that Thingol and his wife were so tender and gentle and accepting of him/her. I wonder if Beren even heard about what had happened or ever met little Finwe. Hmmm. Puzzle. Perhpas that requires a sequel. Don't wanna be greedy tho!
One tiny crit, when you said he saw the cave it confused me, because I first thought of a little cave and then it turned out to be a big cave and maybe you should tweak that part a little.
I hope Madhros was really sad that he never saw the old Fingon again, but he sounded really mean--eww just yuck about him and Fingon's cruel father--you really made me hate them.
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Post by oshun on Apr 10, 2009 22:08:20 GMT -6
I forgot to say that Finogn is my favorite elf
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Post by oshun on Apr 10, 2009 22:11:00 GMT -6
Now I'm certain you guys have perverted me. Time was that I wouldn't even look at stuff like this - and now, not only do I read it, but I thoroughly enjoy it. Very nicely done, IgnobleBard! The double-entendres just keep coming... so to speak... don't they? ;D And Happy Birthday, Oshun! Thank you, Aearwen.
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Post by Darth Fingon on Apr 10, 2009 22:12:46 GMT -6
One tiny crit, when you said he saw the cave it confused me, because I first thought of a little cave and then it turned out to be a big cave and maybe you should tweak that part a little. Um excuse me I do not accept FLAMES on my story. This is a PRAISE ONLY story! i CLEARLY SAID in the paragraph that he entered a LARGE WIDE cave not a little cave! So I dont think you need to tell me how to write my story.
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Post by ignoblebard on Apr 10, 2009 22:15:46 GMT -6
ROFL! I have to admit I really did not see that coming, Darth. I was wondering what the whole business about Fingon turning into an elleth was leading up to.
My theory is that he came looking for Fingon and was given another spiderweb covered potion that turned him into Huan for his misdeeds.
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Post by oshun on Apr 10, 2009 22:16:01 GMT -6
One tiny crit, when you said he saw the cave it confused me, because I first thought of a little cave and then it turned out to be a big cave and maybe you should tweak that part a little. Um excuse me I do not accept FLAMES on my story. This is a PRAISE ONLY story! i CLEARLY SAID in the paragraph that he entered a LARGE WIDE cave not a little cave! So I dont think you need to tell me how to write my story. Don't bully me! I have big friends and they spell better than you too! That wsa not a flame anyway! I simpel helpful comment.
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Post by oshun on Apr 10, 2009 22:18:26 GMT -6
ROFL! I have to admit I really did not see that coming, Darth. I was wondering what the whole business about Fingon turning into an elleth was leading up to. My theory is that he came looking for Fingon and was given another spiderweb covered potion that turned him into Huan for his misdeeds. That's harsh. You have a dark mind. How about ahappyu ending. Like Madhros was really sorry and apologiuzed.
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Post by Darth Fingon on Apr 10, 2009 22:19:14 GMT -6
Don't bully me! I have big friends and they spell better than you too! That wsa not a flame anyway! I simpel helpful comment. YOU ARE A TROLL AND I HAVE REPORTED YOU TO THE ADMIN!!!!! But thanks for reviewing! :DDDDDDDD
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Post by oshun on Apr 10, 2009 22:21:41 GMT -6
I believe in full disclosure:
IgnobleBard [12:17 AM]: LOL You got slamed for flaming too. Neener neeer. Heartofoshun [12:17 AM]: Yeah. Well I told him off back! Heartofoshun [12:18 AM]: I got him where it hurts. Accused him being a bad speller. IgnobleBard [12:18 AM]: I saw that. lol Now you're getting reported. ROFL
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Post by Darth Fingon on Apr 10, 2009 22:21:49 GMT -6
My theory is that he came looking for Fingon and was given another spiderweb covered potion that turned him into Huan for his misdeeds. Uh that is the plot of chapter 2, are you plagerizing me?!!!!!!!!
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Post by oshun on Apr 10, 2009 22:23:15 GMT -6
Don't bully me! I have big friends and they spell better than you too! That wsa not a flame anyway! I simpel helpful comment. YOU ARE A TROLL AND I HAVE REPORTED YOU TO THE ADMIN!!!!! But thanks for reviewing! :DDDDDDDD Fine. Just be like that. He never pays any attentuon to what goes on here anyway.
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Post by oshun on Apr 10, 2009 22:24:28 GMT -6
This is just getting worse and worse. Stope before the thread is deleted!
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